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Re: Dawson family
Slow down and work on spacing (not kerning) before getting too much further. The fitting here is uneven and generally too tight. That'll need fixing before you can really get down to evaluating how t…2 -
Re: Freitag — toying around with a geometric display sans
Is your Greek ascender line the same as Latin? I wonder if it should be lower. I mean I get that tall ascenders are a starting premise for this face, but Greek ascenders are mostly much more complica…3 -
Re: Kaffeebohne Display
Think about having the counters (interior white spaces) relate more. It's weird that /b/'s counter is wider than /o/'s, for example, or that /c/ is welcoming in a bunch of white space when other lett…1 -
Re: Freitag — toying around with a geometric display sans
That structure is better. The crossbar may stay straight a little too long in the "a" section in the two lighter weights, esp. in the regular.2 -
Re: Freitag — toying around with a geometric display sans
That /v/ might be a little light. And I wonder if your overshoot is a touch too much in this weight.1
